Major reflection

1.discuss strengths and weaknesses of your product based on the peer review: what improvements were suggested, what did you modify and change?

My strength wasthat everything was enjoyable and that the story had good suspense,i had no weaknesses but i was suggested on putting the text in order because some people got confused when they read.

2.discuss the strength and weaknesses of your performance during this unit: what did you do well in? what could you have done better?

i did well in creating a story and making the facial expressions tomatch the characters.
i could have picked a diffrent variety of charcters and made there attitudes more intresting.

3.discuss the impact this product may/will have on your friends and family.

Well my friends would find it very intresting and a bit funny,so that we would makenumerous jokes about it and my family would be proud of me for creating a good story and taking my time to do it even if i rushed a bit in the end. my small cousins would find it very ice and it would influence them to play toondoo.

Peer Review

MY PEER REVIEW

MY COMIC STRIP IIS BASIC AND EASY TO READ, ITS ABOUT A GIRL WHO'S MOTHER DIDNT WANT THE LITTLE GIRL AND THE LITTLE GIRL GOT LOST,THEN FOUND BY A NICE GIRL WHO TOOK HER IN, A FEW DAYS LATER SHE FINDS A NOTE FROM HER MOTHER THAT BROKE HER HEART.

THE MAIN QUESTIONS I WANT YOU TO ANSWERS ARE.

1. DO YOU THINK THE STORY IS GOOD?
2. DOES MY STORY MAKE NO SENSE?
3. DO THE EMOTIONAS MATCH THE WAY THEY ARE BEHAVING?

AND THIS IS THE FINAL PART.

PART 13.

this is part 10

11 and 12

Okay i learnt 3 things today.

1. Never trust the internet.
AND
2.I learnt how to upload the images to the internet and into my blogger.
AND
3.I learnt that when you enter my blog and you can't see the picture clearly then just click on it and and it will expand so you can see it clearly with big letters.

And this is my 7-8-9, this is all i reached up to.

the top one is 4, then 5 then 6

( the top one is one and the second one is 2)

This is my third ( some are going to be mixed up)

I dont think I will be able to finish my comics today because when i logged in and went to the internet and typed in toondoo.com the site said that it was under construction but i went at lunch and it worked in the library so i guess toondoo went on construction an hour ago right after break.

I Finished Part 3-4-5-6-7-8-9!

Today in I.T I worked really hard, because I reached part 8 and i did 9-10 at lunch time on Tuesday and Wednesday, i think i'm going to reach over 12 slides, and when i enter class the next day i plan to ask the teacher if she can help me post the comics on the blogs.

Nothing else happened today.

Well today i did 2 slides of BETRAYED! part one and 2, i reached the part where monica's bestfriend leaves her at the park. Today was a quiet class and i learnt something new, i learnt how to copy toondoo and paste it on paint, but is still dont know how to post it on my blog, i need the teacher to help me with that. other than that everything was easy and simple. i am starting on my third slide

I was the first to finish my design and plan a week ago, but with my horrible luck i forgot to save them and so i had to do it again, my plan complteley changed because i forgot my toondoo account and created another one, also i wrote my first blog today because i didnt know i had to keep track.

anyway my story is about a little girl who was walking in the park, gets lost and couldnt find her friends, then meets a friendly street girl who will help her find her mother and family and realized that they moved away and didnt want her anymore.

Design

Plan:
first i will make a small comic about a shrimp boy who gets in loads of trouble because of his humerous mouth. and i'll make it a funny comic, i need the internet and the keyboard and mouse and also the moniter, i will not need music because this will be posted on my blog.
i will complete the project by making shrimp get adopted and live a happy ending.
the people that watch it will evaluate it by spelling and actions (if the actions make sense with the comment) and if its boring or not and how i can improve it.

My assignment will be a comic called the adventures of Shrimp, the website i will use will be toondoo because i think that it will look funny, it will be like comic strips andits about a small boy called Shrimp as his nickname and tells funny quotes that offend people and lets him get into alot of trouble, a once he is through one trouble he soon runs into the next! it will be 5 comic strips each one cut into two, and two full strips, it fist starts at a class room and ends in bed, there will be a total of 7 stips and 12 scenes. the way it will be evaluated is if it shows i put alot of effort in it and if it is a success on making people laugh, and if the amount of strips is acceptable. Unfortunatly it wont move but thats the whole point of a comic. Since i will be using toondoo i will need characters and props and backgrounds.

Exploring!!

Aniboom:
Aniboom.com can create a solid anything you want and can make it talk and move like a small cartoon show.
The advantages are:
you can create anything you want and use any colour you want.
Disadvantages: its very complicated.
Aniboom.com
Toodoo:
Toondoo.com lets you create variuos comics with speech bubbles diffrent items charackters and lay outs.
Advanteges: You can make comics, laugh at the characters and explore AND post your ideas.
Disadvantiges: you cant make them move or talk (only by a speech bubble).
Toondoo.com

Macromedia:
In macromedia you can draw anything you want and write anything and type any where with any font and size you want.
Advanteges: its fun practicing drawing on the computer.
Disadvanteges: you have to write and draw everything from scratch and there are no animations.

Reflection And Evaluation

My website is amazing, sure it might not be what i planned but i think i made it better than i had planned, its more colourful, and it has more pictures.
The information that i planned though is still the same, its the same information that i had planned from the begining.I wrote about animals senses when they know when they know a volcano is coming hours or days later.I also wrote about the animals with the best senses.And what kind of volcanos their are, like the ones under water or the world most deadliest.

Colour and design of website: Jana's Web


The colour is pretty good because it doesn't blend in, each colour is bold and easy to read
the heading though does not match the background, but the title is correct.but that's on page one, on page 2 and 3 there are paragraphs that have a very light and bright colour it can make someone blind.

Images:
the background image is big and clear, but the images under picture are really blurry, and i cant make out what it is.But the other pages have clearer pictures and background(1&2)

Navigation and organisation:
The links all work together, and they take us to the correct place mentioned.

Information pages:
their are 3 pages,and all of them have correct information, but there isn't alot of information on any of the pages.

Text:
The text is big enough to read but on some page like 1 and 2 they are to bright to see,like the title 'facts you have to know' is in light pink so its hard to see.

Page 1:
Colour & Design:
The wrighting is easy to see,and allthecoloursdont blend in to eachother but still match.

Images-Size:
The backround picture is a bit blurry not alot, but her other pictures are tiny, and some match the colour in the background so it is hard to see.Her background takes up the whole page.

Navigation and Organisation:
Her links are only for two pages, page 1 islinkied to page 2, and page 2 is linked to page 1.and the fisrt page is linked to the thrd page and the third page is linked to the first page.

Information Pages:
she spelled valcanoe wrong in the first paragraph, enviroment is spelled incorectly on the second paragraphs.
her paragraphs are thin, there is not enough information on the first page.

Text - size: her text size is twelve and it is readable, even the colour is readable.

Page 2:
Colour & Design:
the only picture there is, is the background picture, there are no other pictures.

Images - size:
the backround immage fills in the whole page.And it is not blurry.


Navigation and organisation:
The links work perfectly.

Information pages:
there is not enough information again,only thin paragraphs.


Text - size:
The text size is big, but bright yellow which makes it hard to read.

Page 3:
Colour and design :
the colours are good and the background is big.

Images - size:
the image sizes are good and not blurry.

Navigation and organisation:
The link works really good it takes me to the home page.

Information pages:
There is not alot of information and all the information is appropriot.

Text - size:
The text size is small but hard to see because tyhe colour is too bright.