Major reflection

1.discuss strengths and weaknesses of your product based on the peer review: what improvements were suggested, what did you modify and change?

My strength wasthat everything was enjoyable and that the story had good suspense,i had no weaknesses but i was suggested on putting the text in order because some people got confused when they read.

2.discuss the strength and weaknesses of your performance during this unit: what did you do well in? what could you have done better?

i did well in creating a story and making the facial expressions tomatch the characters.
i could have picked a diffrent variety of charcters and made there attitudes more intresting.

3.discuss the impact this product may/will have on your friends and family.

Well my friends would find it very intresting and a bit funny,so that we would makenumerous jokes about it and my family would be proud of me for creating a good story and taking my time to do it even if i rushed a bit in the end. my small cousins would find it very ice and it would influence them to play toondoo.

Peer Review

MY PEER REVIEW

MY COMIC STRIP IIS BASIC AND EASY TO READ, ITS ABOUT A GIRL WHO'S MOTHER DIDNT WANT THE LITTLE GIRL AND THE LITTLE GIRL GOT LOST,THEN FOUND BY A NICE GIRL WHO TOOK HER IN, A FEW DAYS LATER SHE FINDS A NOTE FROM HER MOTHER THAT BROKE HER HEART.

THE MAIN QUESTIONS I WANT YOU TO ANSWERS ARE.

1. DO YOU THINK THE STORY IS GOOD?
2. DOES MY STORY MAKE NO SENSE?
3. DO THE EMOTIONAS MATCH THE WAY THEY ARE BEHAVING?

AND THIS IS THE FINAL PART.

PART 13.

this is part 10

11 and 12

Okay i learnt 3 things today.

1. Never trust the internet.
AND
2.I learnt how to upload the images to the internet and into my blogger.
AND
3.I learnt that when you enter my blog and you can't see the picture clearly then just click on it and and it will expand so you can see it clearly with big letters.

And this is my 7-8-9, this is all i reached up to.

the top one is 4, then 5 then 6

( the top one is one and the second one is 2)

This is my third ( some are going to be mixed up)

I dont think I will be able to finish my comics today because when i logged in and went to the internet and typed in toondoo.com the site said that it was under construction but i went at lunch and it worked in the library so i guess toondoo went on construction an hour ago right after break.

I Finished Part 3-4-5-6-7-8-9!

Today in I.T I worked really hard, because I reached part 8 and i did 9-10 at lunch time on Tuesday and Wednesday, i think i'm going to reach over 12 slides, and when i enter class the next day i plan to ask the teacher if she can help me post the comics on the blogs.

Nothing else happened today.