Wednesday, May 21, 2008

MY PEER REVIEW

MY COMIC STRIP IIS BASIC AND EASY TO READ, ITS ABOUT A GIRL WHO'S MOTHER DIDNT WANT THE LITTLE GIRL AND THE LITTLE GIRL GOT LOST,THEN FOUND BY A NICE GIRL WHO TOOK HER IN, A FEW DAYS LATER SHE FINDS A NOTE FROM HER MOTHER THAT BROKE HER HEART.

THE MAIN QUESTIONS I WANT YOU TO ANSWERS ARE.

1. DO YOU THINK THE STORY IS GOOD?
2. DOES MY STORY MAKE NO SENSE?
3. DO THE EMOTIONAS MATCH THE WAY THEY ARE BEHAVING?

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